1. You used first person several times in your paper, try to get rid of all the 'I's
2. Why might Americans have less rules and structure in child rearing than in other countries?
3. Can you compare strict American families to those of Chinese ones? For contrast.
2. Why might Americans have less rules and structure in child rearing than in other countries?
3. Can you compare strict American families to those of Chinese ones? For contrast.